Journal Writing – Rules & Guidelines

Rules

Rules must be followed. Rules are like laws.

  • When you write your journals, you must do the following:
    1. Write an outline
      • When you write a P.R.E.P. answer, I want to see an outline (in bullet point form) for your ‘R’ (reason) and ‘E’ (examples)
      • When you write a P.R.E.O.P. answer, I want to see an outline (in bullet point form) for your ‘R’ (reason), ‘E’ (examples), and ‘O’ (“on the other hand”, counter-examples)
    2. Write a first draft
    3. Proofread, edit, and rewrite
      • Remember: the single best piece of writing advice to improve writing that you, everyone, can do to improve your writing is to rewrite. Remember, genius rewrites, and you should too.
    4. Write your second (or final) draft

Rules

  • All pronouns must logically point to a noun

Points on style – “style points”

  • Write with verbs
    • English is a verb centered language.   Verbs have energy
  • Do not shift person.
    • Write in the first person for personal, subjective, accounts
    • Write in the third person for academic, objective, writing
    • Write in the second person, often using the imperative mood, for giving instructions or directions
      • Question: Do you think that morality should be taught as a subject at schools?

        “I don’t think I need to learn morality at school because people have morals unless they are psychopaths. And even if you learn morality at school, people don’t become moral. Even if you learn morality, students will be tired of moral classes. So I don’t think I need to learn morality at school.”
  • Do not shift verb tense; stay in the same verb time

    What is “verb tense”? Remember that verbs have two main parts: action and time.
    • When writing in the past, stay in the past

Guidelines

Guidelines are weaker, less strict, than rules, which must be followed. Another idiom for “guideline” is “rule of thumb”. Guidelines and rules of thumb are suggestions for best practices.

“Guideline” comes from woodworking, carpentry. A guideline gives carpenters a path to follow while sawing wood.

  • When sentencing, punishing, criminals, judges almost always follow sentencing guidelines for punishments to fit criminals’ crimes.

“Rule of thumb” comes from a general, not perfect, measurement for an inch, which is roughly the length from the first joint to the tip of a person’s thumb. The term rule of thumb refers to a general way of doing something that, though not always perfect, provides a handy way to complete the task at hand.

  • If you are having computer problems, a good rule of thumb is to restart the computer.

Song: You Were Meant For Me

Singer/songwriter Jewel wrote You Were Meant For Me as a teenager and recorded the song when she was 20. The original music video won the award for Best Female Video at the 1997 MTV Video Music Awards.

“You Were Meant For Me”

I hear the clock, it’s six A.M.
I feel so far from where I’ve been
I got my eggs, I got my pancakes too
I got my maple syrup
, everything but you.

Got my pancakes, break the yolks and make a smiley face. I don’t leave my keys in the door anymore.

I break the yolks and make a smiley face
I kinda like it in my brand new place
Wipe the spots off of the mirror
Don’t leave my keys in the door
I never put wet towels on the floor anymore
’cause

Dreams last so long
Even after you’re gone
I know that you love me
And soon you will see
You were meant for me
And I was meant for you.

I called my mamma, she was out for a walk
Consoled a cup of coffee but it didn’t wanna talk
So I picked up the paper, it was more bad news
More hearts bein’ broken, more people being used

Put on my coat in the pouring rain
I saw a movie it just wasn’t the same
‘Cause it was happy or I was sad

And it made me miss you oh so bad
’cause

Dreams last so long
Even after you’re gone
I know that you love me
And soon you will see
You were meant for me
And I was meant for you.

I go about my business, I’m doing fine
Besides what would I say if I had you on the line?
Same old story, not much to say
Hearts are broken, every day.

I brush my teeth, I put the cap back on
I know you hate it when I leave the light on
I pick a book up and then I turn the sheets down.
And then I take a deep breath and a good look around

Put on my pj’s and hop into bed
I’m half alive but I feel mostly dead

I try and tell myself it’ll all be alright
I just shouldn’t think anymore tonight
’cause

Dreams last so long
Even after you’re gone
I know that you love me
And soon you will see
You were meant for me
And I was meant for you.

Yeah, you were meant for me and I was meant for you.


  1. Is this good writing? Give a PREP answer.
    • Do you see punctuation problems?
    • How do we fix them?
  2. Do these lyrics follow PREP?
  3. What is she saying?
  4. Do you believe her?

You Were Meant For Me, official music video:

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